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> My New Design, www.bruno89.co.uk
Bruno
post Jul 2 2008, 02:06 PM
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what do people think to my new design ? this sort is soming new to me :| my first full page site ohmy.gif !

be as cruel as u like peeps smile.gif

http://www.bruno89.co.uk/NEW.jpg


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Jacob
post Jul 2 2008, 03:33 PM
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Hmmm, interesting design. It looks exactly like a 404 page. Very creative!

Hint: I think you may have misnamed the image.


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Linda
post Jul 2 2008, 03:34 PM
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Dave were you in the sun again today?


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Mark
post Jul 2 2008, 04:58 PM
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I think it should be this: http://www.bruno89.co.uk/New.jpg

And uhm.. I like it, but did you know there's a site called Lipsum? smile.gif


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Linda
post Jul 2 2008, 05:28 PM
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L-O-V-E it Bruno!!!!


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post Jul 2 2008, 05:41 PM
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QUOTE (Linda @ Jul 2 2008, 11:28 PM) *
L-O-V-E it Bruno!!!!


Agreed. That's looking really rather splendid. smile.gif
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post Jul 3 2008, 02:14 AM
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I really like it, I remember your designs before were very dark, so I'm glad to see you bringing in some colour like that smile.gif


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Bruno
post Jul 3 2008, 11:19 AM
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QUOTE (Linda @ Jul 2 2008, 04:34 PM) *
Dave were you in the sun again today?


you know what. this is realy frustrating me sad.gif i need some rest huh ?! 14hour days arn't healythy sad.gif i feel so stupid sad.gif

anyway to the other rplys

first jacob. that 404 is no normal 404 lol ITS MAGICAL! tongue.gif

and the others i forgot what ppl replyed now :S

thanks for the compliments biggrin.gif i got kinda bored of the dark look and tryed to incorporate a bit of the grunge style to the light n bright side of life lol.

so do people think this would make a good website then ?

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post Jul 3 2008, 11:20 AM
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QUOTE (Mark Poppen @ Jul 2 2008, 05:58 PM) *
I think it should be this: http://www.bruno89.co.uk/New.jpg

And uhm.. I like it, but did you know there's a site called Lipsum? smile.gif


yeah but i couldn't be botherd to get it lol im so lazy some times lol


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post Jul 3 2008, 11:22 AM
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Looks pretty good to me. Very much in favor of this over your current.

Great colors.

I can see some small alignment and padding things that need to be adjusted, but this is just a comp so I'll not go into that.

Nice work.


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Bruno
post Jul 3 2008, 11:29 AM
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QUOTE (joey @ Jul 3 2008, 12:22 PM) *
Looks pretty good to me. Very much in favor of this over your current.

Great colors.

I can see some small alignment and padding things that need to be adjusted, but this is just a comp so I'll not go into that.

Nice work.


no please do! all the help i can get is welcome biggrin.gif


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post Jul 4 2008, 01:04 AM
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QUOTE (Bruno @ Jul 4 2008, 02:29 AM) *
no please do! all the help i can get is welcome biggrin.gif


Just some variation on your design... aligning some things. Its good to line stuff up with other stuff and keep a bit of a consistency or at least a natural ratio of proximity between design elements. For example, if something is 20px away from this over somewhere, perhaps elsewhere follow that and have other things 20px away...

Speed tests have been done where we are monitored for how quickly we can take in information ,and the biggest thing that slows down the intake of information is regression of eye movement... basically the human eye often looks back and forth between what it just looked at, and what its about to look at. It uses its last thing it focused on as a way to create a connection between the next thing.

If your design is randomly placed, thats fine, you can do whatever you like, but if there is some sort of link between things that the eyes can follow without needing to think too much I think you might find that your design will have this new feel to it... congruency... integrity... strength... unity.

Just some ideas... take care
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post Jul 4 2008, 01:23 AM
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QUOTE (cosmicbdog @ Jul 4 2008, 08:04 AM) *
congruency... integrity... strength... unity.

AMEN, AMEN, AMEN.....

I like it too, although I have a strong dislike for all shades of bright green....
I think one more color in the design would make it more exciting... maybe a bright blue or dark red....


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Bruno
post Jul 8 2008, 03:15 PM
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lol i coded this website and it looked poo :\ so im working on another design that im starting to like.
ill post it up when iv finished it smile.gif and this one invoves blue aswell as green wink.gif + its a tad more exiting to the eye. not just plain tongue.gif


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post Jul 9 2008, 02:47 AM
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Why did it look 'poo'?


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