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Justice For Second!
This is a discussion on Justice For Second!, within the Graphics Critique & Squeeze section. This forum and the thread "Justice For Second!" are both part of the The Squeeze Center category.
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| Justice For Second!, Vector Art. Branding |
 Feb 14 2008, 11:06 AM
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Squeezing  Group: Members Posts: 96 Joined: 14-February 08 Member No.: 76  |
So im still having problems with my hosting company so my portfolio is on hold for a week or so.
I plan to release a blog/tutorial/resource site as well. All on the same domain for SEO. Want them to look different. "Justify" is the portfolio. "Justice" will be the blog/resource/etc. what you think for "Justice"? Purposely less formal and what to have a more fun and bold design for it rather than the 'clean' business look for "Justify". All C&C's Welcome!
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Feb 14 2008, 11:07 AM
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 The Rabbit King Group: Team Leaders Posts: 291 Joined: 13-February 08 From: Chasing carrots in Farmer Jack's farm! Member No.: 9 |
Nice and simple. Don't like green but other than that its a good logo
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Feb 14 2008, 11:08 AM
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 Fresh Squeezed Group: Members Posts: 19 Joined: 13-February 08 From: In Daniel's Rabbit Pen. Member No.: 10 |
Wow thats awesome!
Hmm, I think it's fine as it is but could you show me one with the green more green than yellow. Hard to explain 
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Feb 14 2008, 11:18 AM
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Squeezing Group: Members Posts: 96 Joined: 14-February 08 Member No.: 76 |
always have this problem at work lol. Every colour looks amazing and bright and wonderful on this monitor. Get home and it's shocking!
Will have a play at home and repost! Thanks! |
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Feb 14 2008, 11:55 AM
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Fresh Squeezed Group: Members Posts: 17 Joined: 14-February 08 From: Somerset, UK Member No.: 62 |
I don't know if you're going to apply the shading to get the 3D look across the whole thing but I would suggest you do as the rest of the logo looks flat compared to the 'J'.
I really would reconsider the green because that's a pretty shockingly bright shade. Maybe make the green darker, more grassy as opposed to a lime green. Other than that, I think it's got potential, it's slick and fun looking. -------------------- 'What's an Intel chip doing in a Mac?' 'A whole lot more than it ever did in a PC.' |
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Feb 14 2008, 08:40 PM
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New Squeeze Group: Members Posts: 5 Joined: 14-February 08 Member No.: 129 |
I agree that the "ustice" looks a little flat. Other then that, I can see this being a very good logo.
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Feb 14 2008, 08:56 PM
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 Rapid Squeezer Group: Mentor Posts: 223 Joined: 14-February 08 From: NY, USA Member No.: 127 |
Hey Justify,
Looking good! I actually have a few different comments/ideas/questions to throw out there for you... When I think of "justice" and "justify" I think of them in reverse, meaning I would see "justify" as being more fun, and "justice" as being more serious. That's just my thought, but I wanted to throw it out there. As for the logo, I like the concept. My suggestion would be to use a darker shade of green, maybe a little lighter than something in the "forest" range, and definitely give depth to the rest of the lettering. Also, the dot over the "J" seems slightly a bit off from the circular flow of the "J"... I would just move it to the left slightly so it looks like the dot kind of "pops" out of the "J". Hopefully this all came across the right way! I just thought I'd share my thoughts.  Take care, Rich -------------------- |
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Feb 15 2008, 02:18 AM
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 Squeeze Machine Group: Members Posts: 697 Joined: 13-February 08 From: Borneo Member No.: 8 |
The letter J is in 2-D but the rest of them is not! Hemmm...?
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Feb 16 2008, 07:20 PM
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Rapid Squeezer Group: Members Posts: 102 Joined: 16-February 08 Member No.: 163 |
I like it all apart from the 'j'. It doesn't look quite right to me.
-------------------- Jack Franklin | Eportfolio & Weblog
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Feb 17 2008, 05:11 AM
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 Master of the Universe Group: Advisors Posts: 1,157 Joined: 15-February 08 From: London, England Member No.: 141 |
Everything but the J does look a little flat. If you considered the shading it would be pretty good.
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Feb 18 2008, 12:40 PM
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 Rapid Squeezer Group: Members Posts: 146 Joined: 14-February 08 From: Northampton, England Member No.: 117 |
DUDE! i love it! nice n fun n the design is "dribbles"
-------------------- Thanks, ---------------------------------Dave. My Portfolio....:: bruno89.co.uk (60% finished) Information.....:: Available for work --------------------------------- |
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Apr 1 2008, 05:35 PM
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Squeezing Group: Members Posts: 96 Joined: 14-February 08 Member No.: 76 |
*Bump*
I finally had a bit of time, well i took time from sleep... but anyways It's fully 3D now! What's your thoughts?
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Apr 1 2008, 05:48 PM
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 Don deluzione Group: Team Leaders Posts: 1,006 Joined: 13-February 08 From: Canada eh? Member No.: 7 |
Looks alright, but the shading is off..
If the light comes from the top left, why isn't there a shadow at the bottom of the last letter (e). The shadow on the dot on the right side.. work on that a little and you're good to go!
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Apr 1 2008, 06:06 PM
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 Co-Founder Group: Co-Founders Posts: 2,773 Joined: 13-February 08 From: Pink House in USA Member No.: 3 |
Justify is that hand made or do you have a 3D program for that?
Other than the two things Mark suggested it is fantastic! -------------------- |
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Apr 2 2008, 04:18 AM
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Squeezing Group: Members Posts: 96 Joined: 14-February 08 Member No.: 76 |
lol now im awake again i can really see the shadow issues!
Shouldn't be that hard to change. @Linda. It's not a 3D app just illustrator. The J is custom. The usitfy is a font with a few changes. Then of source the shadowing etc. And thanks
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Apr 2 2008, 06:05 AM
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Co-Founder Group: Co-Founders Posts: 2,773 Joined: 13-February 08 From: Pink House in USA Member No.: 3 |
Wow.. you did a nice job! I love doing things in vector programs!
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