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> My Porfolio Web Site!, www.bruno89.co.uk
Bruno
post Jul 1 2008, 02:18 PM
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hey can you please critiquw my website people i wana know how you feel about it biggrin.gif

i wana know what you think to the design, code and content ( exept index page ).

this is the first site that i have done over 90% myself biggrin.gif then other 10% is from the help i got on here btw

i designed it and coded it myself and i managed to write some sort of content haha biggrin.gif

anyway tell me wat you think biggrin.gif


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Linda
post Jul 1 2008, 02:33 PM
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How about a link here too? wink.gif


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Bruno
post Jul 1 2008, 02:45 PM
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im going crazy i tell you! i realy should stop working it the sun huh ?! this is embaresing i put 2 up and forgot the links on both of them sad.gif *slaps self*


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Bruno
post Jul 1 2008, 02:46 PM
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and there we go again i forgot it ! www.bruno89.co.uk


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Vivara
post Jul 1 2008, 04:21 PM
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You got the easy part right - the coding. Well Done on that. Now to the design. The design isn't horrible, but it's not exactly even half exciting compared to today's standards. It's a fairly simple design with the overused grungy look superimposed.

At the end of the day, it functions as a website and showcase - but it doesn't make me go 'wow' or make me think that you're very creative.

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ScottR
post Jul 1 2008, 06:32 PM
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  1. The design is well done. I like the color scheme, it's seems to go well together. It also flows well with your theme.
  2. The content on the site is real bare. Not much there. And while your portfolio is still small, it leaves a user with very few options on the site. The index page seems to be the lightest on content. I would definitely add some content there. (Content doesn't have to be text)
  3. The coding of the site is well done. I didn't see any errors, or anything that I would definitely do different.
  4. I would have the errors that are displayed to the user on the event that they didn't fill out the contact form properly remain on the same page. Maybe write it in the page with JS, or hide and display the errors with JS.
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MikeHopley
post Jul 2 2008, 03:28 AM
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As with your other site, the lack of leading makes everything looked cramped.

Simply adding some leading and margins/padding to your text would make a big improvement. You need more white-space.
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Bruno
post Jul 2 2008, 11:13 AM
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QUOTE (MikeHopley @ Jul 2 2008, 03:28 AM) *
As with your other site, the lack of leading makes everything looked cramped.

Simply adding some leading


i dont get ya :S

and thanks guys for your input i know the content is sh** and im working on that as for the design im kinda bummed that you din reli like it i supose id better get back to the drawing bored huh sad.gif tuff but fair. ill just go and cry while i redesign it lol ! and i love the colours BTW so they can stay biggrin.gif


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